Sunday, April 10, 2011

I've never told her....!!


I've never told her how her smile lifts me up...
She's not the LOL type. But sure she giggles at times and gets me into the tickle. She smiles, and in fact laughs so much, laughing hugging her stomach insanely. But you never hear it after those initial tones which pick up the laugh. There's a kid in her, laughing, trying not to make a sound. You can see her eyes go wet, all in joy! Her lips don't need a lip gloss. Since they already wear a smile. Cute she!

I've never told her how much I adore her eyes...
Her eyes, they're so beautiful. But no! That's not the apt word. It would take essays to explain. I hear waves crash over the rocks near the sea every time she gives a slow wink with her half-shut eyes. Imagine a rainbow over the sea, those are her eyebrows. They are natural, nothing more, nothing less. She looks into my eyes and I go blind, all in a flash. Her eyes, they glitter more than diamonds. She's happy, she smiles, and they glitter even more. She does get angry at times and her eyebrows try joining their ends. They make me worry. I place a kiss right between that gap so that they stay separated, for happiness' sake. She gives a worried look sometimes, looking down, her eyes trying not to meet mine. Only waiting for mine to lift hers up.

I've never told her how her voice drives me crazy...
She isn't a vocalist. But I would rather let her talk and do the listening any day over anything! It's adorable and shy, an effect of her shy nature, an effect of her innocence. I would frighten her just to see her voice wobble. The way she calls out my name in the cutest ever form on earth, makes me thank my parents for naming me that way, otherwise this cute angel of mine wouldn't be toying my name this way! More crazy do I go when she speaks half asleep in bed. I wish the sun never rose up again the next day just to hear her mutter those words. I don't care what she says though. Her unclear voice is all that matters to me.

I've never told her how sweet she is...
The way she hugs me from my behind when I return home with full of sweat, the way she makes me rest over her bosom and make me hear her heartbeats compose tunes for me, the way she pulls my cheek when I lie on her lap, the way she brushes her lips with those of mine, the way she grabs my hand tightly when she needs me the most, the way she cutely punches my stomach when I fool her, the way she winks at me when she achieves something... I declare that I lost to her, and indeed I'm lost, in her! Sweetness personified. My honey!

I've never told her what she means to me...
She means happiness. She means sweetness. She means seasons. She means paradise. She means love. She means friendship. She means mother. She also means a child. She means the most, and oh. that would be sacrilege. She means EVERYTHING. Get me a word beyond 'everything'. She would mean that to me.

I've never told her how much I love her...
You probably might think why I haven't told all these to her. Well, definitely I would love to. But the fact is that I haven't met her yet! I haven't moved with her yet. I haven't married her yet to express all my love for her. But when I do, she would probably say............. I better not expect too much! But still, I wish she says "You silly, I knew it even before you said!"

19 comments:

Anandan said...

nice romantic story........
but a twist in the end...
some lines really heart touching...

Aswin Kumar said...

Dai! Is it a story for you? :P Thanks by the way. :)

Aslaan said...

nice work.. bit filmy at some points but liked overall

Aswin Kumar said...

@ hemanth:
imagination has no bounds, mind you!

DheerajRao said...

Oh full ♥ ♥ story :P

Nice it isss! :D

gopal said...

tat pic suits the post greatly....

Aswin Kumar said...

@ dheeru
Lol! thanks boss!

@ gopal
at last!! :D

damefoille said...

This is just fantastic for a first timer. Just shows how romantic u can be ashwin. Nice writeup dude!

Aswin Kumar said...

Thank you so much. I had no idea what I was writing until i finished it. ;-) Was out of my mind for a while. :D

nandy said...

too good ashwin :)every line has a great feel and romantic touch..save this for ur gal..sure she is lucky..loving someone is something anyone can do..but expressing the love is not wat all are capable of doing..u are capable :)ur wish will come true :)

Aswin Kumar said...

Thank you, thank you, thank you Nandhu! *bows* :) :)

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